Mumba the Stray
A sonnet39 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debbie,
This is a well done sonnet that tells a great story. It shows how animals seem to know when they are needed. It also shows how love can cure grief.
I am sad he got hit and died. But twelve years is good for a dog and it was long enough to bring your husband back to life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Hi Debbie,
This is a well done sonnet that tells a great story. It shows how animals seem to know when they are needed. It also shows how love can cure grief.
I am sad he got hit and died. But twelve years is good for a dog and it was long enough to bring your husband back to life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you again for such a lovely review and thoughts, all deeply valued! Take care Debbie
Comment from lindafisher
This is such a sad poem about your dog Mumba. He turned up like an angel just when he was needed and stayed to ease an aching heart. I'm so. Sorry you lost him this way.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This is such a sad poem about your dog Mumba. He turned up like an angel just when he was needed and stayed to ease an aching heart. I'm so. Sorry you lost him this way.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Linda, for your kind review and very sweet thoughts, all greatly valued. Take care Debbie
Comment from Yusita
What a heartfelt piece. Dogs just bring so much joy and even healing into our lives, which your poem conveyed eloquently. So sad his life ended that way, but the happiness and healing he brought will never be forgotten.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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What a heartfelt piece. Dogs just bring so much joy and even healing into our lives, which your poem conveyed eloquently. So sad his life ended that way, but the happiness and healing he brought will never be forgotten.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review and thoughtful comments, all greatly appreciated. Debbie
Comment from Terry Broxson
Debbie, this is a heartfelt poem and very well written. It's the second poem I have seen today about a stray dog. What is remarkable about both poems is the story of the kind human who took care of the dogs and the amount of pleasure the dogs gave back to their humans.
All dogs go to heaven. Excellent. Terry.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Debbie, this is a heartfelt poem and very well written. It's the second poem I have seen today about a stray dog. What is remarkable about both poems is the story of the kind human who took care of the dogs and the amount of pleasure the dogs gave back to their humans.
All dogs go to heaven. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Terry! As ever, I appreciate your kindness and support. Take care Debbie
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Isn't it amazing how animals can bring healing into our lives? You have written a truly heartfelt verse about Mumba and the impact he had on your husband's life. Love always wins. Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Isn't it amazing how animals can bring healing into our lives? You have written a truly heartfelt verse about Mumba and the impact he had on your husband's life. Love always wins. Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Ginda! I greatly appreciate your kindness and support and hope that you're keeping well. Sadly, we have no Thanksgiving here in the UK but I wish you a very happy one. Debbie x
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, how tragic that such a wonderful pet was lost in that way -- my sincere condolences. Our pets are a part of our family, and this one sounds like he was a very special part of yours. Your sonnet is a beautiful tribute (and I agree -- his soul has transitioned, without a doubt).
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Oh, how tragic that such a wonderful pet was lost in that way -- my sincere condolences. Our pets are a part of our family, and this one sounds like he was a very special part of yours. Your sonnet is a beautiful tribute (and I agree -- his soul has transitioned, without a doubt).
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Dawn! I'm delighted by your lovely comments, always a pleasure to receive. Debbie x
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Douglas Goff
This has sad connotations but really is a happy story. This dog had healing powers and I do believe that the Creator will send spirit animals to comfort us at times of great turmoil.
When my wife's father passed, he was her greatest buddy whom she adored, a black cat showed up. For lack of a better term, it stalked her. met her in the driveway when she came home from work. Sat on her lap, feet, shoulders every chance it got. It was a HUGE comfort to her.
These creatures are blessings. Great read, Debbie!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This has sad connotations but really is a happy story. This dog had healing powers and I do believe that the Creator will send spirit animals to comfort us at times of great turmoil.
When my wife's father passed, he was her greatest buddy whom she adored, a black cat showed up. For lack of a better term, it stalked her. met her in the driveway when she came home from work. Sat on her lap, feet, shoulders every chance it got. It was a HUGE comfort to her.
These creatures are blessings. Great read, Debbie!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Doug! I greatly appreciate your kindness and support. Debbie
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice sonnet, Debbie. It amazes me how a dog can impact someone's life. We always had dogs until we got older. Now my sons and grandsons bring their dogs for visits.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Nice sonnet, Debbie. It amazes me how a dog can impact someone's life. We always had dogs until we got older. Now my sons and grandsons bring their dogs for visits.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Paul! Your kindness and support, as ever, greatly appreciated. Debbie
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a powerful and moving poem about how a dog can save one's soul. I had a dog once who stayed with me while I was recovering from a broken heel and was bedridden for almost six months.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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a powerful and moving poem about how a dog can save one's soul. I had a dog once who stayed with me while I was recovering from a broken heel and was bedridden for almost six months.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Jake! Your thoughts are always gratefully received. Pets can be amazing in times of trouble or sadness, in particular. Take care Debbie
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful but very sad poem, and his photo is stunning. Dogs know and understand, and he chose your husband knowing he would be able to both receive and give love. I'm so happy he had such a happy life after his time as a stray, but sad he died so tragically. A pet's death and the ensuing grief are devastating.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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A beautiful but very sad poem, and his photo is stunning. Dogs know and understand, and he chose your husband knowing he would be able to both receive and give love. I'm so happy he had such a happy life after his time as a stray, but sad he died so tragically. A pet's death and the ensuing grief are devastating.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy! As ever, your kindness and support are much appreciated. Take care Debbie x