Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Although come from and home don't have rhyming sounds, this is a good effort for the contest and your presentation is good. The story looks cute.

Best wishes,
Alex

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you for your kind review! I have fixed the rhyming words.

Comment from T.A. Walk

Good

This is a well done little piece, but I caught some spelling errors I wanted to mention.

Around is spelled aroune.
The second time mouse is used it is spelled mosues.

Other than that I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thank you! It's fixed.

reply by T.A. Walk on 13-Nov-2023

Awesome!! Good luck!!