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Scenes at a Third Party

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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from BethShelby
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I haven't heard from these characters in a while. The mystery hasn't been solved yet. How do they attatch wires to a dead clone? Dying does necessarily mean gone.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024
    It is another clone.
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very cute script you have penned again. I think I must have missed a lot of them, but I hope to read some more! I hope your 2024 is starting out good. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 02-Jan-2024
    you are so welcome!!!
Comment from nomi338
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This plot is now thicker than bean soup, and it is starting to smell like somebody cut one. Could it have possibly been you? Maybe it was someone else, I have so many questions and so few answers.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    I will try to expose as much as I can as we go.
Comment from lyenochka
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This is getting wilder all the time. It's always good to see Ned back and I'm glad he shares his de-confusing exercise that Pons taught him. He's definitely good for Betty!

Not sure if these were typos or intentionally done:

penquin joke. (penguin?)

clone communuty will (community)

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Spelling? I spelled something wrong? What are the odds?
    Thank you for the kind review, Helen.
reply by lyenochka on 02-Jan-2024
    I was most puzzled by your use of a Q for G in "penguin" - it's not a typical typo...
Comment from royowen
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The two police officers have reason to draw their weaponry as cloned heads are uncovered by Chim, and they aim at GED, and there is his double Ged, great post Bill, how's Kathy? Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : sitting (in) s bathtub,

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Roy. Don't you hate a quality joke with a word missing?