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A tableau poem for the Japanese Club
3 total reviews
Comment from
Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the Japanese Poetry Club event. Great tableau entry with good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
Comment from
lyenochka
A lovely picture in your tableau poem - of the healing of water from "tears from heaven" to "dew drops" bringing refreshing life to plants and how that is like the healing refreshment of "gentle words."
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
Like parched plants we all need refreshment and care - acts of kindness can be like dew drops from heaven. Glad you liked this one.
reply by lyenochka on 13-Nov-2023
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work for that form. Your Author Note was helpful and informative. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
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