Spring poem
Hailu: 3-5-3 word & 5-7-5 syllabled Haiku - see notes2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I remember seeing crocuses in February this year as they are one of the first flowers to bloom. Spring is such a delightful season and you brought this time of year to life here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I remember seeing crocuses in February this year as they are one of the first flowers to bloom. Spring is such a delightful season and you brought this time of year to life here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Dolly,
In my corner of the world, those crocuses appear in late March and early April. And sometimes they peek out from under a snowfall!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Thanks Alex! Pleased with your comments about my short poem.
