Rabbit in the Woods
animal nonet contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I love this cute nonet, because it's as cute as its subject matter. It fulfills the syllabic structure of the nonet prompt, and it is indeed about an animal. I love the descriptive words used, even without the accompanying picture, I was able to visualize it. I also appreciate the clever use of alliteration in the first two lines. Perhaps it could also be injected into the remaining lines.... except of course the last one... LOL!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
I love this cute nonet, because it's as cute as its subject matter. It fulfills the syllabic structure of the nonet prompt, and it is indeed about an animal. I love the descriptive words used, even without the accompanying picture, I was able to visualize it. I also appreciate the clever use of alliteration in the first two lines. Perhaps it could also be injected into the remaining lines.... except of course the last one... LOL!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Hi Aiona,thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Rabbit in the Woods, has the proper formatting and describes the typical bunny passing by on its way to wherever these lagomorphs go. ..................
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
This nonet, Rabbit in the Woods, has the proper formatting and describes the typical bunny passing by on its way to wherever these lagomorphs go. ..................
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
We have a rabbit that rins through our backyard sometimes. It's so nice to be able to enjoy nature where you live. This is excellent work for the challenge. You use descriptivist words and colorful imagery.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
We have a rabbit that rins through our backyard sometimes. It's so nice to be able to enjoy nature where you live. This is excellent work for the challenge. You use descriptivist words and colorful imagery.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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HI Alex, thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very well written piece of poetry in nonet style in which you describe a rabbit and its actions very well. I found it to be vividly descriptive. Well done
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
This is a very well written piece of poetry in nonet style in which you describe a rabbit and its actions very well. I found it to be vividly descriptive. Well done
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hi Wendyanne, thanks for your comments and review.