Gnats To You!
A cool cat warms up!2 total reviews
Comment from andreanicole
This picture goes perfectly with this funny, playful poem.
I like the rhyming scheme and the playfulness of the gnat, who is definitely intelligent - he knows the cat was too cool for his own good, kissable but dangerous. So fresh in fact, that he knew to seek out and turn on the thermostat. That's hot!
A cool poem indeed!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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This picture goes perfectly with this funny, playful poem.
I like the rhyming scheme and the playfulness of the gnat, who is definitely intelligent - he knows the cat was too cool for his own good, kissable but dangerous. So fresh in fact, that he knew to seek out and turn on the thermostat. That's hot!
A cool poem indeed!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you. it's weird, when I write seriously, I want to follow it with somehing silly, and vice versa. Thanks for reading!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Loved the alliteration here and this is a bit like a tongue twister.
Suggestion for this line
(Then flew off the mat to turn (up) the thermostat)
A pleasure to read.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Loved the alliteration here and this is a bit like a tongue twister.
Suggestion for this line
(Then flew off the mat to turn (up) the thermostat)
A pleasure to read.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thanks for the suggestion! I appreciate it and will see now if I can revise it!
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I voted for you and wish you luck x x x
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I am extremely thankful, O Nameless One!
