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Lustful Warning

A monster's Guilty Conscience

6 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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That's a creepy one! Well expressed in your 60 word dash, you manage to convey horror in your very cold and measured tone. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Eeeee-YIKES!! Well, this is about as terrifying a group of sixty words as was ever written! Nice job, Mystery Writer. You definitely made a memorable presentation with this one, replete with super creepy artwork. I'll be shocked if this doesn't end up in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you. I hope so.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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This entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest is interesting but i dont understandwhat its about.

Good flash fiction form and word count.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    It is a warning to the person they have been watching. It is someone who is not well and warns his victim that their end may be coming by his hand.

    I hope this helps you understand it more.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds rather scary and a tormenting women here which is not okay, but it seems this beast is on the loose, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Great intriguing piece. For some reason I kept picturing the girl as the villain doing the talking in my head. I think it's the picture.

Anyways, great piece.
Good luck!
D

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    It could go either way. Thank you for your review.
Comment from JSD
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A suitably spooky piece as we are around Halloween time. Intriguing and thought-provoking. Well done and good luck in the competition.

John

"Poetry is the space between words."

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you