Take a Leap
Assurance of things hoped for, conviction of things not seen6 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Excellent entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much, Gypsy. I've had a look at some of your work and have seen how knowledgeable you are about this form, so I really appreciate your review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece makes me want to close my eyes and fall into the arms of the one I trust. It makes the reader feel that connection to something other than themselves.
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This piece makes me want to close my eyes and fall into the arms of the one I trust. It makes the reader feel that connection to something other than themselves.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
To walk by faith is genuinely like that, like stepping off a cliff and expecting God to catch you, but more importantly, faith is far more rewarding than not doing it, realising God loves us so much, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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To walk by faith is genuinely like that, like stepping off a cliff and expecting God to catch you, but more importantly, faith is far more rewarding than not doing it, realising God loves us so much, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nice piece of 5/7/5 and even nicer notes. It is always hard to believe in something that one can not see with their own eyes.
Good job and good luck in the upcoming competition!
D
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Nice piece of 5/7/5 and even nicer notes. It is always hard to believe in something that one can not see with their own eyes.
Good job and good luck in the upcoming competition!
D
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent. A lovely 5-7-5 of faith, with excellent notes as well. I am also a Christian and can echo that we need to seek and follow His will the have the courage to step forth with courage and conviction, knowing we are in safe hands. Best wishes gif your entry.
Wendy
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Excellent. A lovely 5-7-5 of faith, with excellent notes as well. I am also a Christian and can echo that we need to seek and follow His will the have the courage to step forth with courage and conviction, knowing we are in safe hands. Best wishes gif your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Taking a risk will always be thwart with danger and faith can help us and empower us, but there are not guarantees in life, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
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Taking a risk will always be thwart with danger and faith can help us and empower us, but there are not guarantees in life, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much, Dolly!