Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter Three"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
8 total reviews
Comment from Janis M.
I'm wondering if the child belongs to him and that's what he meant in the previous chapter of she kept something from him.
I did realize something, I'm not sure if in later chapters you describe what the characters look like, but about half way through I did find myself wondering and trying to picture their images since they hadn't been described yet.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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I'm wondering if the child belongs to him and that's what he meant in the previous chapter of she kept something from him.
I did realize something, I'm not sure if in later chapters you describe what the characters look like, but about half way through I did find myself wondering and trying to picture their images since they hadn't been described yet.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you Janis, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from karenina
Oh, this sounds more and more sinister.
The plot thickens, as they say!
Did you omit a word in this sentence?
"She would've made sure to get rid of number, if she had no intention of ever getting in contact with me again."
The number? My number?
I'm beginning to wrestle with what William knows...
(Could Rebecca be his child, I wonder?)
I'm hooked!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Oh, this sounds more and more sinister.
The plot thickens, as they say!
Did you omit a word in this sentence?
"She would've made sure to get rid of number, if she had no intention of ever getting in contact with me again."
The number? My number?
I'm beginning to wrestle with what William knows...
(Could Rebecca be his child, I wonder?)
I'm hooked!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.
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You are maddeningly good!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Full of angst, terror, and bad memories. Why can't she talk to anyone about it? What was so terrible to make her a bowl of limp noodles. tell us more, we want more. Karen
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Full of angst, terror, and bad memories. Why can't she talk to anyone about it? What was so terrible to make her a bowl of limp noodles. tell us more, we want more. Karen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
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Thank you, I?m pleased that you?re enjoying it.
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have a good week Karen
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this is so scary, I wonder how would I react if I will be put face to face with my Nemesis. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Wow, this is so scary, I wonder how would I react if I will be put face to face with my Nemesis. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you. I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an intriguing chapter Jacob and old acquaintances coming to work as the same place you work could have some problems and we don't know what William has done, but it is making Angela very nervous. Mums can always read our emotions and I love the Mrs Trunchbull's reference. A fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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This is an intriguing chapter Jacob and old acquaintances coming to work as the same place you work could have some problems and we don't know what William has done, but it is making Angela very nervous. Mums can always read our emotions and I love the Mrs Trunchbull's reference. A fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you Dolly, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have heightened my curiosity as to why Angela is so afraid of William. I can't wait to find out.
when she was a teenager. (out of place, it doesn't fit here)
Every time it comes to my turn (omit 'to')
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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You have heightened my curiosity as to why Angela is so afraid of William. I can't wait to find out.
when she was a teenager. (out of place, it doesn't fit here)
Every time it comes to my turn (omit 'to')
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you Barbara. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sarita Méndez
Wow ! What a great text, that entertains the suspense so nicely that it gives the desire to read the whole story !
I love how you describe what happens in Angela's mind, he fears, her hesitations, her sad memories of the times when she was with William...
I'm curious to know what "he knows" !!
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Wow ! What a great text, that entertains the suspense so nicely that it gives the desire to read the whole story !
I love how you describe what happens in Angela's mind, he fears, her hesitations, her sad memories of the times when she was with William...
I'm curious to know what "he knows" !!
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is the first chapter I have read of your book so far but I will try to find the time to read the previous chapters. I found this chapter intriguing and I want to know more!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is the first chapter I have read of your book so far but I will try to find the time to read the previous chapters. I found this chapter intriguing and I want to know more!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.