Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that's fun to read.
Best wishes,
Alexandra

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023

Thank you, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Lisasview

Exceptional

Loved this one... Fantastic film footage... Black with white font... so perfect.
Such eerie thoughts... Clever for the Vampire 5-7-5 contest,
Lisasview

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you so much for this exceptional review. It means a lot to me. :)

Comment from JSD

Excellent

A great entry for the competition. Nice choice of drink and then an amusing twist at the end. A great deal contained in seventeen syllables. Just think you need 'Marys' - no need for an apostrophe. Otherwise well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol I am enjoying reading the entries for the vampire contest and yours is a great one. I enjoyed the punchline as in, "I was the main course." Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A chilling post for this vampire contest and I felt the bite and tasted the Bloody Mary here, a fun post and I wish you luck with this one, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Thank you! I like having fun with these Halloween poems. :)

Comment from Janis Miller

Excellent

This is funny. I love it! I don't have any recommendations. Good luck in the contest! Bloody Mary could be a drink, or it could be a Bloody, Mary! (Terrible pun)

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023

Fantastic pun. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)