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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from nomi338
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Loose lips, cause slips, sinks ships, steal tips, etc. I think Lori told more than she should have, and now questions with difficult answers must be faced. Some limited information must be more carefully safeguarded.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    I will have to check to see if any of my friends are clones.
Comment from BethShelby
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Where is this cloning place? I didn't realize that clones were created full grown. I thought they had to start out as babies. Maybe they are like robots. Some people shouldn't be duplicated.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Suspension of disbelief is necessary here, Beth. Chalk it up with Death and zombies.
Comment from lyenochka
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It's a good thing that AA can set Bull straight as he has a habit of butchering names. It's strange that Betty confessed to the murder but I guess she feels connected to both Ned and GED.

All I know is that may plans (my?)
Who is Lori? She doesn't appear in the Cast of Characters.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    I know I changed that may/my thing already. I added Lori to the list.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha, ha what an ending:"ori: He came from the same place that -- ah -- nevermind.

Fox : Same place as what?

Lori: I have a big mouth.

Fox : Same place as what?

Lori: The same place Felix got his clone.

Fox : Felix? Felix doesn't have a clo--

Lori: Take it easy, Fox.

Fox : Felix has a clone -- it's me." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2023
    Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.