Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from lyenochka
Whew! I'm glad that DED de-frocked/de-cloaked D-red as that guy is not to be trusted with zombie-creating powers. AA's poem makes the scene much more somber and serious.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
Whew! I'm glad that DED de-frocked/de-cloaked D-red as that guy is not to be trusted with zombie-creating powers. AA's poem makes the scene much more somber and serious.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Helen, for giving this scene a look, and thank you for the boost. Bill
Comment from BethShelby
Well now these characters were all frozen while DED dealt with Zombie Ged, have they forgotten the Z-Ged was the culprit? Is Ned off the hook or does he still need a lawyer?
I'm glad D-Red got demoted back to dealing with bugs. AA is a pretty good poet.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
Well now these characters were all frozen while DED dealt with Zombie Ged, have they forgotten the Z-Ged was the culprit? Is Ned off the hook or does he still need a lawyer?
I'm glad D-Red got demoted back to dealing with bugs. AA is a pretty good poet.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Beth, for the positive review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, this scene is more like an horror scene than anything else. Everybody's affected and doesn't quite know what to do. That's the bottom line, I think.
This is great, Bill, and so well thought out. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
Oh dear, this scene is more like an horror scene than anything else. Everybody's affected and doesn't quite know what to do. That's the bottom line, I think.
This is great, Bill, and so well thought out. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from nomi338
Better, and I am pleased that Pons did not get attacked by zombie GED. I am now ready to move on from here and be further grossed out by your bizarre story telling.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
Better, and I am pleased that Pons did not get attacked by zombie GED. I am now ready to move on from here and be further grossed out by your bizarre story telling.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Your kindness is matched only by your good taste in zombie literature.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Just have to have a laugh at this mayhem. I am not totally sure what is going on but that does not matter. Bring on more mayhem and totally insane characters.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
Just have to have a laugh at this mayhem. I am not totally sure what is going on but that does not matter. Bring on more mayhem and totally insane characters.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Barry