Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Mrs Fine is everyone's nightmare neighbour. Miranda obviously needs to talk to someone, but she's stubborn. Now she has to go to work, sharing the shift with a student. Even though she knows him, she won't be sharing happy stories with him. Lol. I feel quite sorry for the lad! Another exellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Mrs Fine is everyone's nightmare neighbour. Miranda obviously needs to talk to someone, but she's stubborn. Now she has to go to work, sharing the shift with a student. Even though she knows him, she won't be sharing happy stories with him. Lol. I feel quite sorry for the lad! Another exellent chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Mrs. Fine is everywhere. She knows the low down in the trailer park. Glad you like the chapter. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent descriptions to put us right there with Miranda. Everyone wants to protect her, but she is resenting it. I love the comments from the mirror about her having trust issues. Mrs. Fine is so irritating. Great job with this character. I want to punch her, too.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Excellent descriptions to put us right there with Miranda. Everyone wants to protect her, but she is resenting it. I love the comments from the mirror about her having trust issues. Mrs. Fine is so irritating. Great job with this character. I want to punch her, too.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Between her own reflection and mean old Mrs. Fine, Miranda gets some tough skin. Thanks fir this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Wish I had a 6 for you too. Honestly, your story segments are super. I feel like singing
"Supercalifragilisticexpialadocious". Now I cannot get the song out of my head. I owe you 4 more, Karen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Wish I had a 6 for you too. Honestly, your story segments are super. I feel like singing
"Supercalifragilisticexpialadocious". Now I cannot get the song out of my head. I owe you 4 more, Karen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Karen. I'm happy you are enjoying this. Gretchen
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Have a good weekend. What's left. :-) Karen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed your chapter... intriguing plot and well developed characters. I love Miranda... I like the conversations with herself.... lol. It's a fun chapter. It seems like she is well loved, except that annoying Mrs fine who is not fine at all. I know people like that. You are such a good writer (*รท*) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I enjoyed your chapter... intriguing plot and well developed characters. I love Miranda... I like the conversations with herself.... lol. It's a fun chapter. It seems like she is well loved, except that annoying Mrs fine who is not fine at all. I know people like that. You are such a good writer (*รท*) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you. I'm so happy you are enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, ahh... Those conversations with self that are never concluded until they are. So, she's fortunate that she's well loved by many worth while people, who love her and she loves them back, something's going to break, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Heh heh, ahh... Those conversations with self that are never concluded until they are. So, she's fortunate that she's well loved by many worth while people, who love her and she loves them back, something's going to break, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. Gretchen
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Pleasure Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Excellent writing as usual. Authentic sounding dialogue and then you take us into Miranda's head so successfully, and we are with her as she wishes ill on people, like we all do in our heads! Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Excellent writing as usual. Authentic sounding dialogue and then you take us into Miranda's head so successfully, and we are with her as she wishes ill on people, like we all do in our heads! Well done.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your conversations in this part are great, even the one with her mirror self. Her neighbor sounds like someone she might consider killing if she wasn't such a caring person. Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Your conversations in this part are great, even the one with her mirror self. Her neighbor sounds like someone she might consider killing if she wasn't such a caring person. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I think most of us have that one acquaintance in our lives that is like a cactus. Just irritating. Miranda only kills people with her razor tongue. Lol. Thanks so much for this great review. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
You do such a good job character-building when you're not moving the plot forward. It's like Miranda is on the inhale now.
My reflection rolls her eyes at me. "Can't even talk to yourself? Now that's real trust issues." [You're damned good, you know that?!]
I wonder if when she dies, the earth is just going to open up and some demon is going to snatch her. Or should I start sharpening stakes just in case. [I've said it before, but I love Miranda--hopelessly love her!]
Jay
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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You do such a good job character-building when you're not moving the plot forward. It's like Miranda is on the inhale now.
My reflection rolls her eyes at me. "Can't even talk to yourself? Now that's real trust issues." [You're damned good, you know that?!]
I wonder if when she dies, the earth is just going to open up and some demon is going to snatch her. Or should I start sharpening stakes just in case. [I've said it before, but I love Miranda--hopelessly love her!]
Jay
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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And Miranda loves you. Lol. Especially when you understand her view on life. She's a realist, a cynic, and a watcher ... but she still has hope. Thanks so much for this wonderful review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from cat frenette
I am absolutely loving this! Your characters have such life - back stories, neuroses, quirks. I'm going to have to figure out how to find your original story. You keep referring to Miranda's past, and if that story is anywhere near as good as this one, I know I'll enjoy it immensely.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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I am absolutely loving this! Your characters have such life - back stories, neuroses, quirks. I'm going to have to figure out how to find your original story. You keep referring to Miranda's past, and if that story is anywhere near as good as this one, I know I'll enjoy it immensely.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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It's in my profile under Miranda Chronicles. And thank you for this lively review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I see plenty of people are worried about Miranda. I have a feeling they are right. I am wondering who or where all of this is going to come out. I do hope Mitch will be there to help her through it. We haven't seen much of him lately. I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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I see plenty of people are worried about Miranda. I have a feeling they are right. I am wondering who or where all of this is going to come out. I do hope Mitch will be there to help her through it. We haven't seen much of him lately. I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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There is no way she could not be suffering PTSD. She went through a lot. Thanks so much for this. Gretchen