Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from nomi338
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! Things are starting to really heat up now. Let us see how badly D'Weir and his boys can mess this ting up. I am counting on their incompentence to make a real mess of things. Do not let me down.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! Things are starting to really heat up now. Let us see how badly D'Weir and his boys can mess this ting up. I am counting on their incompentence to make a real mess of things. Do not let me down.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Inspector Schlitz always gets his man.
Comment from BethShelby
Most of the dead in the past aren't just left lying around and Ned can still see and talk to them. I guess that ability isn't working as long as the body is still there Ned seems upset enough to use a few expletives. The police don't seem to be in any hurry unless the station is far away. Maybe Schlitz can get to bottom of this. We shall see.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Most of the dead in the past aren't just left lying around and Ned can still see and talk to them. I guess that ability isn't working as long as the body is still there Ned seems upset enough to use a few expletives. The police don't seem to be in any hurry unless the station is far away. Maybe Schlitz can get to bottom of this. We shall see.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Ned can see Agents of Death.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Bill, I am smiling while I read your script. It is both weird and delightful. Cannot wait until the police get on the scene. Seems as though they have been waiting for a case to get into.
Look forward to your next instalment.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Bill, I am smiling while I read your script. It is both weird and delightful. Cannot wait until the police get on the scene. Seems as though they have been waiting for a case to get into.
Look forward to your next instalment.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Barry.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love that 'post-mortem' dialogue re: AB and the memory that he'd previously had more blood than brains. The police will now be involved to solve this mystery so best of luck there! Small edit with 'vacuum.' As ever, a mad but very entertaining script, Bill! Well done, Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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I love that 'post-mortem' dialogue re: AB and the memory that he'd previously had more blood than brains. The police will now be involved to solve this mystery so best of luck there! Small edit with 'vacuum.' As ever, a mad but very entertaining script, Bill! Well done, Debbie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. Out of the million times I have written the word vacuum, I have spelled it wrong somewhere near nine hundred thousand times.
Comment from lyenochka
We know that D-red did it but how will the police figure that out. Maybe they'll attribute it to an accident.
I liked how Ned was concerned for Betty and covered her ears. That's sweet.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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We know that D-red did it but how will the police figure that out. Maybe they'll attribute it to an accident.
I liked how Ned was concerned for Betty and covered her ears. That's sweet.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Ned is the one constant. : )
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He and Pons are the most endearing.