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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from lyenochka
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Those are some very strange conversations! I hope Ned realizes that Betty is falling in a good way. He obviously doesn't know what happened to GED.
Zora must be behind all those TV ads which now only have people of color...do they not want any white customers?

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
    Madison Avenue and Hollywood are going through an adjustment that begins with overcompensating for inclusion.
Comment from BethShelby
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Is this election going to take place next November. Maybe it is starting to get some traction since it we have these esteemed interviewers asking questions.
Poor Ned, he is really sorry he is unable to remember what happened when he was dead. You need to send in a hypnotist to help him remember. He should remember seeing GED and DOA.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    We'll get there.
Comment from nomi338
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Looks like the reporters are stirring the pot with some hard to answer questions. Probably won't be long before they are expelled, sent packing or have to fight to survive the possibly violent attack from hostile attendees.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    I am trying keep the levity here and not get too far into the weeds with hot-button issues.
reply by nomi338 on 01-Oct-2023
    good job.
Comment from kahpot
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A bit of aggression from Zora in this read, Lowell is still up himself, LorDee has the right idea, clear all the dead wood, though the government might look a bit thin, another wonderful read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you, kahpot