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South Carolina

Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Palms"
Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem about the Palms at midnight. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose and your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much Terry for reviewing this. There's another one coming up soon about the sharks!
    Doctor Ricky text me back and I'm not ready to leave her
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Our children are always watching and learning from us. We set the example for them. We are their first teachers. Thank you for sharing this post with us.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    When I was writing this Barbara.
    I thought about basically the palm trees but then I changed it so that we could realize.
    Realize that our children are the world and when we pass away.
    Yes, they take over not the other way around unfortunately.
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