Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 170 "Hankies"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
4 total reviews
Comment from Enrico Langfordino
And who in their right minds would contradict ? Handsome as he is, he'd need a gargantuan 'kerchief' should he ever develop a runny nose. How diverse is nature Aiona. I bet he can poke his nose into all kinds of places !
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
And who in their right minds would contradict ? Handsome as he is, he'd need a gargantuan 'kerchief' should he ever develop a runny nose. How diverse is nature Aiona. I bet he can poke his nose into all kinds of places !
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for your review, Enrico. Yeah, he does have a big ole schnauz, doesn't he?
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Aiona,
Not many use handkerchiefs anymore. They do look pretty until they are used though. I would think they would retain the germs once used for blowing a nose and spread it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
Hi Aiona,
Not many use handkerchiefs anymore. They do look pretty until they are used though. I would think they would retain the germs once used for blowing a nose and spread it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the day.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for your review, Joan. I hope you're staying healthy too!
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Your welcome, Aiona.
Joan
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. My mom always had white hankies. Good idea.You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. My mom always had white hankies. Good idea.You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thanks for your review, Alexandra.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Nicely done! A little verse in praise of a handkerchief. Your abc poem reads smoothly, descriptively and fulfills the brief perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
Nicely done! A little verse in praise of a handkerchief. Your abc poem reads smoothly, descriptively and fulfills the brief perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thanks for your review, Debbie.