Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
This is a fine and inspiring verse of gratitude which concludes with a celebration of people and the fact that they matter much more than material things. Small edit - 4th line from the bottom - (than). Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
It's fixed. Thank you for your help and kind review!
Comment from
John Ciarmello
There is a lot to be grateful for, and you've expressed it well in your poem.
We are given life, and that is our gift. We should choose not to waste it but to celebrate it. Thanks for sharing this. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023