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A Pleiades Poetry Contest Entry20 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This poem is very nicely done. It follows the form perfectly, with a subject matter that most relate to. The picture you paid it with, is heart touching. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This poem is very nicely done. It follows the form perfectly, with a subject matter that most relate to. The picture you paid it with, is heart touching. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Congratulations on your first place win, very deserving.
The rhymes work well without force and create a flow that is just right.
The sentiment is both an honest and heartfelt one that I hope your readers will receive.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Congratulations on your first place win, very deserving.
The rhymes work well without force and create a flow that is just right.
The sentiment is both an honest and heartfelt one that I hope your readers will receive.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from harmony13
This a beautiful and thought provoking poem. I liked what the author
convey in each line. I thought about how so many people who drive are
in a hurray. Now that I am retired I like to just enjoy the peace God gives
us in the stillness. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words
well. A Great Poem, John!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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This a beautiful and thought provoking poem. I liked what the author
convey in each line. I thought about how so many people who drive are
in a hurray. Now that I am retired I like to just enjoy the peace God gives
us in the stillness. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words
well. A Great Poem, John!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you. Like you, I'm retired and I am much more at peace. Our joy truly comes from Christ. I appreciate your review. John
Comment from JSD
A difficult form. I think this is doing well, from the last time I looked, so well done. The whole piece fits together well and makes perfect sense, giving voice to your faith and conviction. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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A difficult form. I think this is doing well, from the last time I looked, so well done. The whole piece fits together well and makes perfect sense, giving voice to your faith and conviction. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your very kind words.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming Pleiades poem! Life is always hurried but we can rest in Him. Great spiritual message about the solution for life's hurried pace. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Great job with your rhyming Pleiades poem! Life is always hurried but we can rest in Him. Great spiritual message about the solution for life's hurried pace. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review and best wishes.
Comment from Wendy G
Just beautiful. I like the contrast between the way we think we need to spend our lives and the reality of where we find our joy and peace. You've expressed a wonderful truth ( for me at least). Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Just beautiful. I like the contrast between the way we think we need to spend our lives and the reality of where we find our joy and peace. You've expressed a wonderful truth ( for me at least). Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm glad you recognized the "wonderful truth" that is at the core of this little poem. I appreciate your review and best wishes.
Comment from mermaids
I think this is the first faith based poem in the pleiades form. I admire your use of the letter "H". Your lines are smooth and "His arms a home, a resting place" is a fitting last line that makes the reader feel good. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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I think this is the first faith based poem in the pleiades form. I admire your use of the letter "H". Your lines are smooth and "His arms a home, a resting place" is a fitting last line that makes the reader feel good. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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The last line is my favorite and the most meaningful to me. I'm glad you picked up on that. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The poem is nice. The picture was complimentary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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The poem is nice. The picture was complimentary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Karen. Actually, is wasn't as hard as you might imagine. Sometimes the words seem to be there; I just have to put them in the right order. I would love to read your work and give you my opinion. Thank you for asking.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Impressively done Pleiades verse here! Not only have you fulfilled the brief but you have added pleasing flow and unforced rhyme in your faith-inspired poem. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Impressively done Pleiades verse here! Not only have you fulfilled the brief but you have added pleasing flow and unforced rhyme in your faith-inspired poem. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Debbie. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Comment from Sally Law
Love, love this spiritual pleiades poem, mystery poet. A comfort and peace exudes from this beautiful offering.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very beet wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Love, love this spiritual pleiades poem, mystery poet. A comfort and peace exudes from this beautiful offering.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very beet wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Sally. I appreciate your review and kind wishes.
Mystery Poet