Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from JSD
Most amusing and surreal as ever. And even some poetry thrown in for added entertainment. I continue to worry about the state of your brain that can invent such satire so effortlessly. Well done. I look forward to more.
John
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Most amusing and surreal as ever. And even some poetry thrown in for added entertainment. I continue to worry about the state of your brain that can invent such satire so effortlessly. Well done. I look forward to more.
John
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John. My sanity seems okay still.
Comment from lyenochka
I loved the book and movie references. But it appears that Skar is really losing it and may have some explaining to do when the police walks up to the car with BB in the driver's seat. He's sound schizophrenic or in preparation for his next job as a ventriloquist.
Another great quip in poetry by AA. Now if we can keep Mauz, Zora and LorDee in reality. But what about poor Ned???
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I loved the book and movie references. But it appears that Skar is really losing it and may have some explaining to do when the police walks up to the car with BB in the driver's seat. He's sound schizophrenic or in preparation for his next job as a ventriloquist.
Another great quip in poetry by AA. Now if we can keep Mauz, Zora and LorDee in reality. But what about poor Ned???
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I am sorting that out now in *DED and Ned*.
Comment from BethShelby
Don't tell me you are really planning ot kill off Ned and Pons is going to make out with the poet? In the meantime, we have Pon's clone going nuts while conversing with a statue. This political party may be as crazy as the Republican one is.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Don't tell me you are really planning ot kill off Ned and Pons is going to make out with the poet? In the meantime, we have Pon's clone going nuts while conversing with a statue. This political party may be as crazy as the Republican one is.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Politics!!!
Comment from kahpot
May have got a bit lost here, though I do feel for Ned, finally he seems to be on a high, and now DED is hovering over him again, good to see Ponsclone getting some attention, very humorous and well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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May have got a bit lost here, though I do feel for Ned, finally he seems to be on a high, and now DED is hovering over him again, good to see Ponsclone getting some attention, very humorous and well written****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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I have another script posted now called DOA and DED. This is part of that.
Comment from judiverse
Fun bit with the Big Boy Statue. Serves Skar right that he got stopped by the police. How will they explain Abracadabrah being the truck if the police decide to search the vehicle? MauMau doesn't have a very great knowledge of the states to be campaign manager. I was wondering about Ned, but then he popped up at the end. Wonder what's up with him if he's wrapped in a blanket. This sounds like typical campaign goings on, unfortunately. judi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Fun bit with the Big Boy Statue. Serves Skar right that he got stopped by the police. How will they explain Abracadabrah being the truck if the police decide to search the vehicle? MauMau doesn't have a very great knowledge of the states to be campaign manager. I was wondering about Ned, but then he popped up at the end. Wonder what's up with him if he's wrapped in a blanket. This sounds like typical campaign goings on, unfortunately. judi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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I hope to move forward a bit faster.
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You must be ahead of the game, then. I can't even figure out how to introduce the Martians in the plan I'm working on. judi
Comment from nomi338
Yo! Leave Ned alone. Of all the people you got to mess with, why does it have to be Ned?. First Ned gets some love and possibly some action, next thing I know his life is in mortal danger. Give Ned a break.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Yo! Leave Ned alone. Of all the people you got to mess with, why does it have to be Ned?. First Ned gets some love and possibly some action, next thing I know his life is in mortal danger. Give Ned a break.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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That?s the reaction I was looking for.
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Well you got it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh Bill, I think this is getting madder! I love it but haven't really got a clue what's going on in this satire. That said, it probably reflects exactly what goes on on these campaign trails.. Thanks for sharing this wackiness:) Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Oh Bill, I think this is getting madder! I love it but haven't really got a clue what's going on in this satire. That said, it probably reflects exactly what goes on on these campaign trails.. Thanks for sharing this wackiness:) Debbie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
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Politics!,,
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I know that much - just get a bit lost with the characters, sorry (it's a bit late here in the uk)