Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from nomi338
Who knew Google was that woke? Or is it that I am the only one still asleep. I hope you know I am going to check this out. Especially since I have never heard this before.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Who knew Google was that woke? Or is it that I am the only one still asleep. I hope you know I am going to check this out. Especially since I have never heard this before.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I typed bitch into the Google tramslater and this is what it showed, Now, it might be Swahili for the puppy's mama, but I'm just using it to establish hidden animus.
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Got it.
Comment from Faith Williams
Manure'n... Ha! That sums it up. I will never think of chess pieces in the same way again. My youngest will get a hoot out of your names for them. (He loves to play chess.)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Manure'n... Ha! That sums it up. I will never think of chess pieces in the same way again. My youngest will get a hoot out of your names for them. (He loves to play chess.)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Faith, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Isabel Fontes
This narrative's witty banter and unconventional dialogue yield a distinct brand of humour that can be unintentional and purposefully crafted.
I eagerly anticipate this story's evolution and how its characters will further contribute to the plot.
Very creative and full of imagination.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This narrative's witty banter and unconventional dialogue yield a distinct brand of humour that can be unintentional and purposefully crafted.
I eagerly anticipate this story's evolution and how its characters will further contribute to the plot.
Very creative and full of imagination.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Isabel.
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from JSD
Hilarious again. The dialect and unusual speech creates such humour, sometimes inadvertently, usually intentionally. I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Hilarious again. The dialect and unusual speech creates such humour, sometimes inadvertently, usually intentionally. I look forward to seeing how this story will develop.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John
Comment from BethShelby
Teaching Ned to play chess is a joke in the making. Actually he has pretty good names for the chess pieces. I'm have figured out the chester kids. Betty should know by now chess might be a bit over Ned's head.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Teaching Ned to play chess is a joke in the making. Actually he has pretty good names for the chess pieces. I'm have figured out the chester kids. Betty should know by now chess might be a bit over Ned's head.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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There are few things not over Ned's head.
Comment from lyenochka
The compromise may or may not work. Maybe Ned should teach LorDee and Zora how to play chess and then they would be ready for their offices, if they win!
Betty is consistent but she probably meant:
Strategy, Ned. Manuevering. (Maneuvering)
Betty: No, Ned. Manuevering. (Maneuvering)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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The compromise may or may not work. Maybe Ned should teach LorDee and Zora how to play chess and then they would be ready for their offices, if they win!
Betty is consistent but she probably meant:
Strategy, Ned. Manuevering. (Maneuvering)
Betty: No, Ned. Manuevering. (Maneuvering)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I knew that looked wrong, but I sent it out anyway. It was almost midnight.