Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Faith Williams
I almost missed that last stage direction... Runamuck liberalism and do-nothing conservatism are excellent descriptions. This one I just shook my head. Definitely more entertaining than the real campaign. Thanks for the laugh, Bill.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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I almost missed that last stage direction... Runamuck liberalism and do-nothing conservatism are excellent descriptions. This one I just shook my head. Definitely more entertaining than the real campaign. Thanks for the laugh, Bill.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Faith
Comment from Isabel Fontes
It's getting even more illuminative!
And let's continue to the next chapter, "We are next".
Continuous congratulations on your creativity and imagination.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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It's getting even more illuminative!
And let's continue to the next chapter, "We are next".
Continuous congratulations on your creativity and imagination.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Isabel, for following.
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You are welcome, Bill.
I am catching up, as I came back from holidays...
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent script. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and made him or her think. I think your left and right sides would be reversed in the USA if you're not in the States. If you are, I'm on the left. A Liberal and maybe you should reverse those. UNLESS maybe I needed to suspend my disbelief. Carry on
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent script. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader and made him or her think. I think your left and right sides would be reversed in the USA if you're not in the States. If you are, I'm on the left. A Liberal and maybe you should reverse those. UNLESS maybe I needed to suspend my disbelief. Carry on
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Left and right are just blocking, not political sides.
Comment from JSD
Crazy crazy crazy. You are a completely insane person to keep creating this manic stuff. Made all the more manic by the colour and the fonts. Excellent stuff. Well done.
John
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Crazy crazy crazy. You are a completely insane person to keep creating this manic stuff. Made all the more manic by the colour and the fonts. Excellent stuff. Well done.
John
Comment Written 10-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from judiverse
How nice the campaign has a poet laureate. Any campaign should have one. I think AA's poem was really inspired by Dr. Seuss. I'm glad Ned has found himself a date. Pons will be proud of him. LorDee has quite a campaign promise--shooting an arrow into the sun. Maybe third party is the way to go. This would be a cute scene to see acted. judi
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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How nice the campaign has a poet laureate. Any campaign should have one. I think AA's poem was really inspired by Dr. Seuss. I'm glad Ned has found himself a date. Pons will be proud of him. LorDee has quite a campaign promise--shooting an arrow into the sun. Maybe third party is the way to go. This would be a cute scene to see acted. judi
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Judi. I am looking over all the Pons and Ned to see how viable they would actually be.
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You're welcome. With Pons along to balance the ticket, it might work. judi
Comment from nomi338
This sounds almost too good to be true, and that is just frightening. I am sitting here right now hoping I never see the day when this sees the light of day, no way.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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This sounds almost too good to be true, and that is just frightening. I am sitting here right now hoping I never see the day when this sees the light of day, no way.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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It may happen, nomi, but only here.
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Might I remind you of the election of number 45? Who knew, who would have guessed?
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Donald Trump would never have entered the race if he didn't know he would win.
Comment from lyenochka
I really liked "THE alternative to runamuck liberalism and do-nothing conservatism." Yes, that describes our current two-party system now.
Hooray that Ned has a date!
You probably fixed the stray semicolon:
I feel like I;m
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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I really liked "THE alternative to runamuck liberalism and do-nothing conservatism." Yes, that describes our current two-party system now.
Hooray that Ned has a date!
You probably fixed the stray semicolon:
I feel like I;m
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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I have a new keyboard and have been correcting semicolons appearing as apostrophes and commas as periods. This one doesn't spell as many words wrong though. : )
Comment from royowen
I guess the voting public may actually see the array of politicians available to vote for as candidates for a possible, and you are an expert at looking at them in a unique, disorderly bunch, with most imaginative names. Beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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I guess the voting public may actually see the array of politicians available to vote for as candidates for a possible, and you are an expert at looking at them in a unique, disorderly bunch, with most imaginative names. Beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Roy. I am sure I cannot match reality for the strangeness.
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But you?ve given it a good college try.
Comment from BethShelby
I thought Zora just conceeded to LorDee. Now it sounds like they aare going to do it together. Did Ned get replaced as her vice president. Does he not have the faith of custard seed Maybe he does since it seems he's got a date with Betty.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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I thought Zora just conceeded to LorDee. Now it sounds like they aare going to do it together. Did Ned get replaced as her vice president. Does he not have the faith of custard seed Maybe he does since it seems he's got a date with Betty.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023
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Politics makes strange Ned fellas.