Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

You had my vote on this one Lisa. I thought u our middle line was very clever...malady or melody.
I love that group and remeber that song well.
Clever write Lisa.
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love the sentiments here as we have the choice to make our day happy or sad and your few words resonate with me and you win my vote, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thanks for your review, Dolly, and for supporting my poem in the voting. Much appreciated.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 06-Sep-2023

You are most welcome x x x

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

It's good to hear from someone who still remembers the music of the 60's, author. :) I had many albums but they seemed to disappear. Recently, I found Chicago, Al Green, and five more LPs. Now, all I need is to go to the flea markets and hunt down a record player. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2023

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

Great advice in your 5-7-5 poem to sing our own song. Love the central line of
malady or melody
Even if we are a bit out of tune better to seek the melody. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023

Thanks very much for appreciating my poem with a 6 rating and for your good wishes.