Sacrificing Freedom
The soldiers fight for our freedom.2 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I caught some 'f' alliteration and 'b' alliteration in this 5-7-5. The 'f' alliteration for 'fight' and 'freedom' and 'b' alliteration is present in 'battle bloody.' One might even say there is 'w' alliteration with 'wars/Worth' as well. Good entry.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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I caught some 'f' alliteration and 'b' alliteration in this 5-7-5. The 'f' alliteration for 'fight' and 'freedom' and 'b' alliteration is present in 'battle bloody.' One might even say there is 'w' alliteration with 'wars/Worth' as well. Good entry.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
We owe a lot to those soldiers. Thank you for paying tribute to them! my blood boils when I think of how Vietnam vets were treated when they returned. This was a very meaningful 5-7-5!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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We owe a lot to those soldiers. Thank you for paying tribute to them! my blood boils when I think of how Vietnam vets were treated when they returned. This was a very meaningful 5-7-5!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you!
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Thanks for your fine poem!