Bands of Color
Rainbow2 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Very simple and flowing words describing an almost mystical sight that is God-delivered. Your choice of rhyme fir this piece well and should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Very simple and flowing words describing an almost mystical sight that is God-delivered. Your choice of rhyme fir this piece well and should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your lovely words Jim!
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hope you do well!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem pointing out colors in a rainbow and the peacefulness of rainbows. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader. Any time I've witnessed a rainbow, I couldn't stare at it long enough.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem pointing out colors in a rainbow and the peacefulness of rainbows. I enjoyed reading it. Your entire presentation is good. You use descriptive words that draw in a reader. Any time I've witnessed a rainbow, I couldn't stare at it long enough.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2023
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Thank you! I know what you mean about rainbows!