A Rainbow
Poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I'll return the favor and give this little 5-7-5 a six star rating because it implies the need for action to show faith. It also has the correct number of syllables. I like the photo and presentation as well. Super job!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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I'll return the favor and give this little 5-7-5 a six star rating because it implies the need for action to show faith. It also has the correct number of syllables. I like the photo and presentation as well. Super job!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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And again thanks for those 6 twinkling stars. zanya
Comment from Machelle Williams
Nice use of the 5-7-5 form. I love the imagery as rainbows are always a sign of hope. It reminds me of Psalm 121 when the writer said, " I will look to hills from whence cometh my help" The idea being that looking up is where our help and our hope comes from.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Nice use of the 5-7-5 form. I love the imagery as rainbows are always a sign of hope. It reminds me of Psalm 121 when the writer said, " I will look to hills from whence cometh my help" The idea being that looking up is where our help and our hope comes from.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from jessizero
I'm pretty sure your last line has four syllables instead of five, but I could be wrong, and it's not in the prompt, so it's not a big deal. I liked your poem very much. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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I'm pretty sure your last line has four syllables instead of five, but I could be wrong, and it's not in the prompt, so it's not a big deal. I liked your poem very much. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023
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Thanks for sharing zanya