The Sabbath
will one find a day of rest?2 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
nice nonet suite
interesting and thought-provoking
may i make a suggestion to put the nonet poems in a suite opposite each other? 9-1...1-9...9-1...etc... just a thought ;)
nice work and thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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nice nonet suite
interesting and thought-provoking
may i make a suggestion to put the nonet poems in a suite opposite each other? 9-1...1-9...9-1...etc... just a thought ;)
nice work and thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
Comment from TPAC
I believe this need more clarity, The historic thought, of the Jews, their tradition still, with the seventh day to rest. This suggestion is solely in my opinion prevailing this read. Hoping some of what I feel helps this read. You know your intent.
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I believe this need more clarity, The historic thought, of the Jews, their tradition still, with the seventh day to rest. This suggestion is solely in my opinion prevailing this read. Hoping some of what I feel helps this read. You know your intent.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023