2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Tropical Storm Hilary".
15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This one was interesting indeed. I nice play on words with tidy meanings.
I saw this also needed review number fifteen.
Bless you, my friend!
Douglas
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
This one was interesting indeed. I nice play on words with tidy meanings.
I saw this also needed review number fifteen.
Bless you, my friend!
Douglas
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Bless you tenfold, Douglas... I do appreciate random acts of kindness.
Gypsy hugs and kisses
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I am glad you and your family are safe.
-You wrote a good haiku about this situation
with effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-I'm sure many are trying to cope with
this unfortunate event, and you do a
good job showing empathy for them.
-A poignant satori line.
-Thanks for sharing this and take care.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
-Good artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I am glad you and your family are safe.
-You wrote a good haiku about this situation
with effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-I'm sure many are trying to cope with
this unfortunate event, and you do a
good job showing empathy for them.
-A poignant satori line.
-Thanks for sharing this and take care.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am praying for your safety and the safety of all those in harms way. I have weathered a few east coast hurricane where I live on the coast of North Carolina. Hurricanes are nothing to shrug off. Be safe. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
I am praying for your safety and the safety of all those in harms way. I have weathered a few east coast hurricane where I live on the coast of North Carolina. Hurricanes are nothing to shrug off. Be safe. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Gretchen. The worse passed through Los Angeles and moved on northern California.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your disaster poem for the club challenge - Excellent picture presentation - good syllable count - good flow. Good story about current events - Glad storm is not effecting you! My Daughter and family are there too - fingers crossed. Dreams float away -Nice Good Job _AP
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
I like your disaster poem for the club challenge - Excellent picture presentation - good syllable count - good flow. Good story about current events - Glad storm is not effecting you! My Daughter and family are there too - fingers crossed. Dreams float away -Nice Good Job _AP
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent alliteration in the first line to increase the threatening mood. The font adds to the feeling that waves are going to make things float away. I felt a bit woozy reading it. Poor couple.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
Excellent alliteration in the first line to increase the threatening mood. The font adds to the feeling that waves are going to make things float away. I felt a bit woozy reading it. Poor couple.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy you and your family are safe warning from the planet we need to act on climate change before it gets seven worse, if it's not already too late, that will go unheard by the right
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
Another fine poem, Gypsy you and your family are safe warning from the planet we need to act on climate change before it gets seven worse, if it's not already too late, that will go unheard by the right
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from JSD
You and your Japanese forms! Still, this is an excellent reminder of another of the horrors facing the world. You choose a graphic image to exemplify this. Best wishes to you and your family. X
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
You and your Japanese forms! Still, this is an excellent reminder of another of the horrors facing the world. You choose a graphic image to exemplify this. Best wishes to you and your family. X
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Hehe... yes, me and my Japanese poems... it's my thing.
Thank you, John. You are very kind.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, a poem of truth. How many first homes are/have been destroyed. How many forever homes have been destroyed. Your poem reads and flows well. Your message is clear. Of special note:
dreams float away
(Gypsy, the only thing that we can count on is change and that nothing
last forever--sad, but true.)
Perfect photo choice. High sensory appeal. A tragedy in motion.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
Hi Gypsy, a poem of truth. How many first homes are/have been destroyed. How many forever homes have been destroyed. Your poem reads and flows well. Your message is clear. Of special note:
dreams float away
(Gypsy, the only thing that we can count on is change and that nothing
last forever--sad, but true.)
Perfect photo choice. High sensory appeal. A tragedy in motion.
Xo. M
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Margaret
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
okay, i probably shouldn't have laughed at this, but i did lol
a great haiku about hilary visiting
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
okay, i probably shouldn't have laughed at this, but i did lol
a great haiku about hilary visiting
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a heartbreaking thought, but your words are put together beautifully. Our daughter and her husband are visiting in LA, safe so far. I'm ready for them to be home!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
This is a heartbreaking thought, but your words are put together beautifully. Our daughter and her husband are visiting in LA, safe so far. I'm ready for them to be home!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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