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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "There is Light"
Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly like your author note where you clarify that important point. I could relate to this for several reasons. I had taught for decades and had to help children be free of abuse as well as leave abuse. Import words here. God bless you! Best wishes! Alexandra

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
    I am grateful that it was relevant for you and God bless you for caring for abused children.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a very tenderly and skilfully expressed sonnet conveying the heartache and torment that the secret world of child abuse once held for its victims. By revealing the truths and finding love and understanding, those wounds can start to heal but faith in God is the only single and conclusive cure. Well done, Michelle for taking on a difficult subject with such sensitivity. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
    Thank you Debbie. I'm glad it touched you.