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Comment from Iza Deleanu
"The living borrow
tomorrow
with joy and sorrow.", quite an interesting view of the ephemerality of our days, when all we have is tomorrow. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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"The living borrow
tomorrow
with joy and sorrow.", quite an interesting view of the ephemerality of our days, when all we have is tomorrow. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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My intended message is that each day is a gift and not to be assumed. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Each New Day, has the proper formatting and may suggest that we are living on borrowed time and will at some point be required to pay it back.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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This lune poem, Each New Day, has the proper formatting and may suggest that we are living on borrowed time and will at some point be required to pay it back.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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My message was more that each day is a gift or borrowed and will always have ups and downs.