Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A lovely spiritual Diatelle poem, Michelle well written and well formed.
I enjoyed the alliteration in waiting, wanting, watching in what is a very tranquil read.
Cheers

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023

I appreciate that it gave tranquility. That is a great complement.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This diatelle, To Be Free, has the proper formatting and imagines the Holy Father beckoning and motioning for us to become aware of our reality and our desire for eternity.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you for the stars.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a fine faith-inspired diatelle which you have skilfully achieved in diamond shape with smooth flow and rhyme. Your sentiments of longing to be heard are met with a response to follow and engage in the "mysteries" that will ensue. Well done, Michelle! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023

Thank you for your review and the stars.