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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Fate of the Orchid"
Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from jim vecchio
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God allowed us to have hearts, and our heart weeps when a favored possession, as a plant you've nurtured from a seed, is gone. Thank you for your painting this message with your words.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
    Thank you for your review. It is encouraging.
reply by jim vecchio on 14-Aug-2023
    You encourage me by your writing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Orchids take a long time to grow and the seed is planted as memorial of what once a fine relationship. There is much sadness in these words Michelle, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
    Yes. The cycle of joy to sadness and the decisions for the future was the theme I was going for in this poem. Thank you for understanding this.