The Voice in my Head
Turning the negative into a positive.15 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this. We all have to deal with negativity every day. I appreciate the form and rhymes. They do not feel forced. The only suggestion I have is to capitalize His will at the end.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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I liked reading this. We all have to deal with negativity every day. I appreciate the form and rhymes. They do not feel forced. The only suggestion I have is to capitalize His will at the end.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from mrsmajor
You are not alone, Patricia, there's a
little voice that hangs around me, at my most difficult times. It tried to tell me all the negatives
that could happen to me during my last breast cancer
surgery last month.
But the words of a loving God is strong
and true..He was with me then, and is with me now...Your Faith is like mine....
"Stong"
Blessings...and a big hug too!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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You are not alone, Patricia, there's a
little voice that hangs around me, at my most difficult times. It tried to tell me all the negatives
that could happen to me during my last breast cancer
surgery last month.
But the words of a loving God is strong
and true..He was with me then, and is with me now...Your Faith is like mine....
"Stong"
Blessings...and a big hug too!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review and I appreciate it very much. Have a good day.
Comment from lyenochka
This is such a good practice! We need to always change the voice within that is not of the Lord and submit it to the Lord in prayer. Great message in your quote and in your poem!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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This is such a good practice! We need to always change the voice within that is not of the Lord and submit it to the Lord in prayer. Great message in your quote and in your poem!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. I appreciate it very much. I hope all is going well for you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I laugh reading this:"I have an obnoxious roommate
It's the voice inside my head
It is with me all the time
Even when I am in my bed. " I think I am the precious owner of one of those too:)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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I laugh reading this:"I have an obnoxious roommate
It's the voice inside my head
It is with me all the time
Even when I am in my bed. " I think I am the precious owner of one of those too:)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review that appreciate it very much. I?m glad you enjoyed this particular one.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patricia,
This poem is a good interpretation of the quote going along with the artwork. An obnoxious roommate is a good metaphor for that negative talk. It is important to quiet for or menta and spiritual good.
Have a great day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Hi Patricia,
This poem is a good interpretation of the quote going along with the artwork. An obnoxious roommate is a good metaphor for that negative talk. It is important to quiet for or menta and spiritual good.
Have a great day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much.
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You?re very welcome, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Negative self talk is very common for me. It is really hard to quit, but I try to remember all the Lord has done for me, and that He loves me. How could I not feel wonderful. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Negative self talk is very common for me. It is really hard to quit, but I try to remember all the Lord has done for me, and that He loves me. How could I not feel wonderful. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. I think we all have times when we have negative self talk and we have to be able to overcome that. Patricia
Comment from Loren .
Pat, please know you are not alone in this dilemma. Of course you know and believe Satan is a liar and will do anything to try and destroy your faith and what God says about you, namely that you are his child and he loves you unconditionally. The mind is a battlefield. I think Joyce Meyer even wrote a book about that very fact. Don't give up or give in. Loren
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Pat, please know you are not alone in this dilemma. Of course you know and believe Satan is a liar and will do anything to try and destroy your faith and what God says about you, namely that you are his child and he loves you unconditionally. The mind is a battlefield. I think Joyce Meyer even wrote a book about that very fact. Don't give up or give in. Loren
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your kind review. Appreciate it very much
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, Patricia. How do we quiet those voices in our heads. Mine keep me up at night. And, boy are mine negative. I've started reading every night from 2 am until 4 am. That is when the voices wake me up. I don't want to hear them, so I read myself back to sleep.
This one struck a chord with me. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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I like this, Patricia. How do we quiet those voices in our heads. Mine keep me up at night. And, boy are mine negative. I've started reading every night from 2 am until 4 am. That is when the voices wake me up. I don't want to hear them, so I read myself back to sleep.
This one struck a chord with me. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your very nice review and every time someone reviews my work.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your rhyming poem is very well done. The rhymes are good and it flows smoothly. I think if I only had one voice chattering at me I'd be happy, no matter how negative it was. I have about 30 in permanence... It's quite a struggle. kay
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Your rhyming poem is very well done. The rhymes are good and it flows smoothly. I think if I only had one voice chattering at me I'd be happy, no matter how negative it was. I have about 30 in permanence... It's quite a struggle. kay
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. I appreciate it so much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I have never read that quote before about the 'obnoxious roommate'.. I think you managed to turn off your obnoxious roomate so you could hear the voice you wanted to. Nicely done Patricia. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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I have never read that quote before about the 'obnoxious roommate'.. I think you managed to turn off your obnoxious roomate so you could hear the voice you wanted to. Nicely done Patricia. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. It is much appreciated.