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Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from Eleri
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I do not normally review religious poems as criticism can often be taken badly. However, in this case, I will make an exception. Firstly the poem seems very wistful and does describe the idea of receiving visions well. As I understand it, Julian of Norwich may have been an anchoress and sought isolation but she did write two books so naming her as silent is, I think, a bit of a misnomer. Also, she acted as a spiritual authority and consular within her order so she did interact with other people quite a lot. Having said that, if you had not mentioned Julian of Norwich I would have liked the poem as a description of visions seen by a hermit.
Eleri

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023

Comment from Bill Schott
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This free verse, The Silent Mystic, touches on the concept of the healing powers of God to cure what is wrong with the body and, writ large, the world.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023