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Comment from JSD
An excellent acrostic, successfully telling the full story of a storm. Great imagery and careful choice of words that fit naturally to your initial letters. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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An excellent acrostic, successfully telling the full story of a storm. Great imagery and careful choice of words that fit naturally to your initial letters. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your stars and review. It is encouraging....especially from an ex-English teacher.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never been frightened by thunder storms as long as I have shelter and those lightening bolts are flashes in the sky that my Grandson always says that God is angry at someone, bless him. A fine acrostic Michelle, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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I have never been frightened by thunder storms as long as I have shelter and those lightening bolts are flashes in the sky that my Grandson always says that God is angry at someone, bless him. A fine acrostic Michelle, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Yes, I have heard the same about lightening. I had the image in my mind of the poor dogs who get so anxious when it storms. Thank you for your review.