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Poems of the things of the spirit

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A faithful rhyming poem Michelle, there is much suffering in the world and some need the practical help they are often denied, I enjoyed your fine uplifting words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is an excellent verse inspired by faith conveying the message that, while we seem to have unavoidable suffering and division in our lives, "the last exhale" will bring about unity and triumph in the form of God's grace, Nicely done, Michelle, with some lovely imagery. Particularly like "grace-strength girds with gold cocoon." Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much for your encouragement and stars. I really do appreciate it.