Just Dance
life is a song4 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Very nice addition for the contest 1-6-1
Enjoyed your rhyme... yes, let's all dance.................
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
Very nice addition for the contest 1-6-1
Enjoyed your rhyme... yes, let's all dance.................
Lisasview, new to this site.......................
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have three votes!
I have never danced in public .. too shy
my pets once in a blue moon have seen me dance to the radio in the kitchen .
I love to listen to music ( I still have my father s Kenwood record player he bought in the 70s.
My mother was a flamenco dancer and I loved to watch her practise .. she performed on cruise ships mainly , night clubs sometimes.
I love breakdancing which appears what the guy in the pic is doing.
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
Ciao poet, you now have three votes!
I have never danced in public .. too shy
my pets once in a blue moon have seen me dance to the radio in the kitchen .
I love to listen to music ( I still have my father s Kenwood record player he bought in the 70s.
My mother was a flamenco dancer and I loved to watch her practise .. she performed on cruise ships mainly , night clubs sometimes.
I love breakdancing which appears what the guy in the pic is doing.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you. We seem to have something in common - the kitchen is where I do most of my dancing. My record player bit the dust years ago, but I still have my radio.
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Ciao JSD !
That?s a shame .. there is something special about vinyls.
I wrote two wee poem about our record player ..no need to review.
It s getting very hard to find new pieces .
Pa had to go to Milano about 8 years ago to find the right stylus , we bought two.
And this is my mother, she also danced Indian. She was 19/20 years old here.
Don?t bother to review.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is fun - your verse and picture very vividly conveying a joyful, energetic and exhilarating mood! Your syllable count is accurate and your post a very worthy entry for the contest! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
This is fun - your verse and picture very vividly conveying a joyful, energetic and exhilarating mood! Your syllable count is accurate and your post a very worthy entry for the contest! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you
Comment from JSD
This seems a very successful attempt at this tiny syllabic form. You have little to work with but have found three apt rhymes, some metaphor and have space to make an important point about life. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
This seems a very successful attempt at this tiny syllabic form. You have little to work with but have found three apt rhymes, some metaphor and have space to make an important point about life. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you