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fun with gun

too many people having fun with guns

3 total reviews 
Comment from Lisasview
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Oh yes, a mad man with a gun... Seems far too easy to get one.... and the boom .......
So terrible...but not your poem... your poem is wonderful... your thoughts are well terrific......
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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
    Thanks a lot as usual
Comment from Eleri
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This poem follows the rules of the 1-6-1 contest and does rhyme. The subject is not something I could say that I enjoy but the poem does make a point so good luck with it
Eleri

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
    thanks a lot I was using
    fun" in an ironic way
Comment from JSD
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A good way to use eight syllables. This is neat and your rhyme is successful. I was going to criticise your use of 'fun'. Then I saw your note. Not sure this comes over in the poem. Needs a question mark but I bet you're not allowed one?

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
    yeah perhaps the sarcasm does not come through