Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Your short poem tells us quite a lot about this western girl you write about. Of course, I don't know the first thing about poetry or a 3-6-9, and if the goose drank wine, or the monkey chewed tobacco on the street car line. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thanks for your entertaining review. Have a nice day. Jen.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love the image and your matching words brought this scene to life Jen, a girl with a lot of promised here who will travel far, a fine trio for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023

Thanks Dolly for the great review. Love Jen.x

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

This was a really cute poem. The artwork goes perfectly with your piece. The rhymes are good, as well as the flow. Best of luck with this and all of your future endeavors.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thanks Monica.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

A perfect combination of artwork and poetry. The 3-6-9 poetry form works well here, each stanza building to describe her and her approach towards her future. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thanks for the lovely review. Jen

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that you have written about the image that you have used. I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is very well done. And your color contrast is good. Patricia.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thanks for the lovely review. Jen

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent 3-6-9 poem, with a wonderful message of dreams and how far we can go, exploring everything, with so much to look forward to, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thank you so much. Jen

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

This is a good write. Made me think of when my daughter rode in several events always awarded with blue ribbons. Thanks, got sharing your talent. I see nothing wrong.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thank you so much. Jen

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your portrait of Claire in this 3-6-9 poem. I also like how you structured the rhyme scheme as aab ccb ddb which makes is flow so well. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thank you Helen

Comment from Janel Mock

Excellent

This is an awesome poem based on this picture! I love horses and I wish I had the chance to ride one freely at 16! Thank you so much for sharing! ~Janel

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thanks Janet

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. Watching our
children, grandchildren and youth of today set their goals for me is
inspiring. The author's words are uplifting and filled with a positive
outlook on life. The artwork is awesome! Have a great week!....Maria

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Thanks Maria for the great review. Jen.