Kangaroo and Hopping Mouse
the challenge5 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I like the moral in this one. You crafted it well. There's no need for competition, life is just about doing one's best with self acceptance. Once that happens life proceeds smoothly and happily. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I like the moral in this one. You crafted it well. There's no need for competition, life is just about doing one's best with self acceptance. Once that happens life proceeds smoothly and happily. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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thanks, Wendy. Your comments are much appreciated.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I love the poem, it's funny, and enjoyable to read and there is a moral value to be learned from it. Your rhyming pattern flows well and the words you chose are very cool.
Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I love the poem, it's funny, and enjoyable to read and there is a moral value to be learned from it. Your rhyming pattern flows well and the words you chose are very cool.
Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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thank you very much for all you said, especially the "cool" bit! :)
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This poem teaches a great lesson. We should stop striving to be so much like others and instead be proud of who we are. This was a well written poem, with nice flow. You missed an "n" in the last "and", but otherwise I see nothing wrong. Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This poem teaches a great lesson. We should stop striving to be so much like others and instead be proud of who we are. This was a well written poem, with nice flow. You missed an "n" in the last "and", but otherwise I see nothing wrong. Good luck!
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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oops. thanks for the catch and your very nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like an unfair contest as the difference in size is obvious, but they both rise to the challenge of the race with individual pride, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This sounds like an unfair contest as the difference in size is obvious, but they both rise to the challenge of the race with individual pride, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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thanks, Dolly!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Well that's certainly a fun poem. Its too bad most people can't learn from our animal brethren. We try so hard to use them to teach (Frog & Toad etc) but the lessons don't seem to stick.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Well that's certainly a fun poem. Its too bad most people can't learn from our animal brethren. We try so hard to use them to teach (Frog & Toad etc) but the lessons don't seem to stick.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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thank you. the powerful need to be taken down a few pegs and think of the people they swore to serve. That has nothing to do with my poem, but it wouldn't be a bad lesson learned.