Thinking of judiverse
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "~ A Promise Kept ~"For judiverse for the loss of her husband
27 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is such a beautiful and well written, heartfelt poem you have penned for Judi. You used really great loving words and great video to go with the words and imagery. love and blessings, Teri
This is such a beautiful and well written, heartfelt poem you have penned for Judi. You used really great loving words and great video to go with the words and imagery. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
Comment from judiverse
This is so beautiful, and I appreciate you so much for writing this. It is elegantly worded and the rhyme is lovely. "A promise kept" is especially meaningful. Your thoughts and prayers have meant so much to me throughout it all. judi
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
This is so beautiful, and I appreciate you so much for writing this. It is elegantly worded and the rhyme is lovely. "A promise kept" is especially meaningful. Your thoughts and prayers have meant so much to me throughout it all. judi
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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THANK YOU, Judi, for your
beautiful review.
Take carem, Jan
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Thanks so much for the beautiful poem you contributed. I deeply appreciate it. judi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Promise Kept, presented with four AABB-rhymed quatrains, brings us to that fateful time when the world fades away and the heavens open wide. Nice.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
This poem, A Promise Kept, presented with four AABB-rhymed quatrains, brings us to that fateful time when the world fades away and the heavens open wide. Nice.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Bill, for your great interpretation
of my poem.
Means much to me, Jan
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Beautifully said Jan. A lovely chapter in the book for Judi. When they are so sick, we need to let them go on their final journey. A lovely heartfelt presentation.
valda
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
Beautifully said Jan. A lovely chapter in the book for Judi. When they are so sick, we need to let them go on their final journey. A lovely heartfelt presentation.
valda
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Pearl, for you great review.
Means much to me, Jan
Comment from BethShelby
This is is lovely poem and the song you shared is also beautiful. I was so sorry to learn of Judi losing her husband over the weekend. I'm glad you are doing a book of memories for her.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
This is is lovely poem and the song you shared is also beautiful. I was so sorry to learn of Judi losing her husband over the weekend. I'm glad you are doing a book of memories for her.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Beth, for your great review.
Means a lot to me, Jan
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Jan,
Thank you so much for this lovely poem in support of Judi. The Fan Story family is so compassionate, and they have lent their talent to comfort a fellow member. Everything about this poem was a delight to the senses.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
Hello Jan,
Thank you so much for this lovely poem in support of Judi. The Fan Story family is so compassionate, and they have lent their talent to comfort a fellow member. Everything about this poem was a delight to the senses.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Tom, for your great review
and comments.
Both mean much to me, Jan
Comment from patcelaw
It is all so very important for us to remember that when we make a promise to somebody that we fulfill that promise and keep it. Nothing destroyed our relationship quicker and making a promise and not keeping it. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
It is all so very important for us to remember that when we make a promise to somebody that we fulfill that promise and keep it. Nothing destroyed our relationship quicker and making a promise and not keeping it. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Patricia, for dropping by to
read and review my presentation.
Both mean much to me, Jan
Comment from karenina
Oh, Jan. My eyes are brimming even as my heart swells for this absolutely stunning poem of comfort and love, and faith that you offer to Judi. When I heard the strains of "Ave Maria" I reached for my tissues! Every line is exquisite, your repeating lines are like gems. So deserving of the sixes I am "forever it seems) out of too soon...
These lines were especially poignant:
"No need to fear, so come with me,
His love you've known has set you free.
His glory lives, He's always near,
so come with me, no need to fear."
Of all I have read, I am certain Judi will find your offering especially soothing.
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
Oh, Jan. My eyes are brimming even as my heart swells for this absolutely stunning poem of comfort and love, and faith that you offer to Judi. When I heard the strains of "Ave Maria" I reached for my tissues! Every line is exquisite, your repeating lines are like gems. So deserving of the sixes I am "forever it seems) out of too soon...
These lines were especially poignant:
"No need to fear, so come with me,
His love you've known has set you free.
His glory lives, He's always near,
so come with me, no need to fear."
Of all I have read, I am certain Judi will find your offering especially soothing.
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you, karenina, for your AWESOME review.
I appreciate your words which were straight from
your heart.
This is a special review and means much to me, Jan
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I can't touch the hem of your reviews....but I tried!
(smile)
Comment from Spitfire
The perfect song and music for a perfect marriage that lasted sixty years. This faith-based poem with thoughts to guide Judy through this tough time.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
The perfect song and music for a perfect marriage that lasted sixty years. This faith-based poem with thoughts to guide Judy through this tough time.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you, spitfire, for your
detailed review.
Means much to me, Jn
Comment from Sally Law
Oh Jan, how lovely and sacred this is for Judi's book. I'm sure it has blessed her so. Beautifully written and illustrated in this form. The video is extra special. Sending you my very best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
Oh Jan, how lovely and sacred this is for Judi's book. I'm sure it has blessed her so. Beautifully written and illustrated in this form. The video is extra special. Sending you my very best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Sally, for dropping by with
a great review and comments.
Both are special, Jan