Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for sharing this post with us. I did enjoy reading. I am amazed at how you can write these daily.

Star because my Souls now a shivering! (Soul's???)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

I fixed the grammar problem with the word souls but I also spent two minutes and ended this to make it better. I And thanks Barbara.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When we lose someone close we can never turn back the clock and we are left to pick up the pieces and move on although our memories never fade whist we are grieving, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thanks Dolly for catching these "Falling Stars"
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This writing has a lot of emotions packed between the lines. It is beautiful, and I found it touching to read. The artwork is perfect for the subject of this writing. Nice work.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thanks and where have you been?
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by prettybluebirds on 17-Apr-2023

I'm taking an online proofreading course, so I don't have much time to spend on FanStory.