fate essence poem
met my fate that date2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting essence poem and when your fate results in meeting your mate then it is a joyous path to walk, I enjoyed the positivity in your words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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This is an uplifting essence poem and when your fate results in meeting your mate then it is a joyous path to walk, I enjoyed the positivity in your words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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thanks as always
Comment from Lea Tonin1
An interesting poem light and sweet and you have complied to the contest rules. Very? Well. And I should write something to bring a smile to a face.
If I might make a couple suggestions wanna be to turn up the font a little bit? Make your text slightly bigger so that the older people may be able to read. It also suggest an illustration or a picture. This will highlight your palm and bring it to the attention of the committee. This in no way takes away from the beauty of you best of luck and have a great evening!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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An interesting poem light and sweet and you have complied to the contest rules. Very? Well. And I should write something to bring a smile to a face.
If I might make a couple suggestions wanna be to turn up the font a little bit? Make your text slightly bigger so that the older people may be able to read. It also suggest an illustration or a picture. This will highlight your palm and bring it to the attention of the committee. This in no way takes away from the beauty of you best of luck and have a great evening!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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good suggestions
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