Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

HI Jesicca a nice Haiku and yes I wonder how many brides have daisies in their bouquet. A field of daisies is lovely to see also. April must be Spring where you are, we see daisies in September here.

Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Chris! Oh yes, we are at the start of spring here in Connecticut! Today is sunny and warm- finally!

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haiku poem - Excellent picture presentation of your Birthday daisy's - good word count and flow - paints a clear picture of wild fields and connects well with " brides bouquet" contrasting the two - nicely done -a good entry for the club challenge - Good Job AP

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023

Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. The satori is a good twist.

Good job,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023

Thank you, Gypsy!!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This club entry was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your club entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

You said a lot in three lines, and painted lovely scenes. The script font adds to the delicate flowers and to your poem.
I love daisies. Good job.
Katharine

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you, Katharine!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I imagined a will bouquet of flowers for this April bride and hopeful spring was born in my mind here, much enjoyed, an ambient write Jessica, a fine post for the club, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly!
<3

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

How lovely is that wow that's beautiful so nice! The poem is awesome too great job! I love the picture you chose too and you're well together perfect!
So much beauty in the written word sometimes don't you think? Those kinds of poems like this one makes me all warm and fuzzy inside springing my favorite season a time of renewal and growth.
Thank you for the smile on the gorgeous poem. I may make one small suggestion, perhaps turn up the font on the text a bit so the old folks can read it? For a lovely day thank you so much. I look forward to your next submission have a good evening!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you, Lea! Great suggestion, I edited accordingly. I appreciate your feedback, as always!<3 <3
Jessica

reply by Lea Tonin1 on 03-Apr-2023

😁