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Tales of our Times

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Collection of short stories

4 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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A well written and timely piece, Zanya. We've been through the pandemic, now we must pick up the pieces, and those that lost a dear one will have it the hardest. There is a friend of mine at our church trying to do that and struggling. Thanks for a great write and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Thanks for sharing - yes it can be difficult to resume zanya
Comment from country ranch writer
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The library is a place you can get lost in and find your way to healing when we lose a
Loved one. You find healing in the peace and contentment of the written words.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Great review zanya
reply by country ranch writer on 30-Mar-2023
    🦋🦋🦋🦋
Comment from jessizero
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This was a great short story in very few words. I know the library would make me feel alive and connected too. Thanks for sharing this story here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Yes the library helps us to reconnect -thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Oh this story is sad and poignant and also speaks of hope and recovery. Good that it's fiction but believable just the same!
I like your subject matter choice. I also can see no issues with your story aesthetically speaking no grammar spelling or punctuation issues that I can see.
Everything looks good and I like your picture choice too!
This is a fine Submission and I wish you all the best in the contest have a great night!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
    Superb review -thanks for the accolade.zanya