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Infectionous Poetry

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Poetry that is different.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, Evil lurks in many places. Thank you for sharing.

Yes because we'll need it! (comma after 'Yes')

Now why are you now in a situation where you become Homeless? (comma after 'Now')

Now what if after all of this Bullshit! (comma after 'Now')

Yes of desire of revenge! (comma after 'Yes')

God there will be not a single. Amen! (comma after 'God')

God there will be absolutely Pain and suffering you see? (comma after 'God')


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
    Thanks again Barbara for spending the time to review and edit my works.
    Have a wonderful day!!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from royowen
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Even a worldly psychiatrist worth his salt know it's sensible to forgive, I think the memory of offence remains because the one and only use that the past is a darn good teacher, the process should be repeated ad finitum, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
    Thanks Roy. As usual, pleasantly reviewed in your own classic way!
    As always,
    Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 22-Mar-2023
    Well done