The Bells ring
The church bell makes beautiful music8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest .
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest .
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I love the sound of old church bells or the bells from old courthouses.
Your text is balanced well in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 Contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I love the sound of old church bells or the bells from old courthouses.
Your text is balanced well in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I miss those things from the bell tower as in my home town the church bells are always ringing and they soothe my soul, I enjoyed your unique musical write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I miss those things from the bell tower as in my home town the church bells are always ringing and they soothe my soul, I enjoyed your unique musical write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Dolly I appreciate your great review 🙂
Comment from lyenochka
You met the 1-6-1 poem requirements well and focused on the ringing of the church tower bells. They can have a calming feeling as the bells are rung with measured predictability. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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You met the 1-6-1 poem requirements well and focused on the ringing of the church tower bells. They can have a calming feeling as the bells are rung with measured predictability. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have good sound imagery with
the opening and closing words, as
well as in descriptive middle line.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have good sound imagery with
the opening and closing words, as
well as in descriptive middle line.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
What is it about OLD church bells that stir our emotions?
Yes, they do indeed "sing," sometimes several times a day.
This old English teacher declares you do NOT need the comma in line 2.
Rod
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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What is it about OLD church bells that stir our emotions?
Yes, they do indeed "sing," sometimes several times a day.
This old English teacher declares you do NOT need the comma in line 2.
Rod
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thanks Rod 🙂
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My pleasure.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Church bells do happen to Bing and ring daily if you pull the rope. Church bells are also rung when it is the end or beginning of a church service. Many parents use a bell to call their youngster in for lunch or dinner. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Church bells do happen to Bing and ring daily if you pull the rope. Church bells are also rung when it is the end or beginning of a church service. Many parents use a bell to call their youngster in for lunch or dinner. Like your poem.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much the church bell still rings in the small
Community where I grew up also.
Comment from papa55mike
That's something you don't see or hear very often anymore. I can't think of a church around us that rings a bell, and that's sad. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a grat day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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That's something you don't see or hear very often anymore. I can't think of a church around us that rings a bell, and that's sad. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a grat day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much