Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

where did you come up with the nice artwork. I suspect you are someone that wears sunglasses to hide the every wandering mind of yours wondering what`s next. Mapping and wandering all in the same breath.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Ciao!

I found it at Pinterest !

you should check it out beautifully pics, paintings, ideas of all kinds ..

people share their recipes, smart ideas etc.

I thought the word MAP was more sensual than the usual overused ? explore?. ( biggrin)

I hoped it would do better : 2 votes .

I might enter the tyburn contest if I wake up with a good idea.

Thanks for the 6 star review!

reply by Kaiku on 16-Mar-2023

👍😎

Comment from Tiara L Hawthorne

Excellent

Creativity has been perfected in this piece. The adjectives you chose really gave the visuals needed to supplement the picture. That is filled with intrigue!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you for the kind review, glad you enjoyed the read..

I wanted my wee poem to ooze lust ( biggrin)

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

You have captured well the erotic side of romance, and the chosen image certainly reinforces this. congratulations on voicing such strong feelings within the specified format.
Julie Lau

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Welcome to Fanstory and thank you for the positive feedback.

.. all the lust must be due to the Spring vibe one feels here, already. ( wink)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I love a lusty romance, and you have got the imagination in overdrive, very well presented, and I like the way your title leads us into the poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Yes, I decided to add fire to my poem this time.. I m feeling the Spring vibe. ( biggrin)

Keep safe!