Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I like the way you insert the quotes from Walt Disney. He was a man who put a lot of good words out there in the world. Your life has been one filled with many events.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023

I've always loved Walt Disney never got a chance to meet him but of course he had started his California Disneyland long before Disney World.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am two years older than you. I'm challenging you to write more poems about your daughters.


Yes I had my dream and yes my dream had come true! (comma after 'yes')'

Because my Greek fictional hero and Argonaut and only son Jason. (comma after 'son')

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

Why? Thanks Barbara for reviewing this one and a couple of corrections. Yes, we're needed.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Hello Mr. Disney, oh sorry I mean Ricky, another wonderful story and read concerning your son, your writing has come along in leaps and bounds, if you can dream it, then you can do it, very well written and thanks for sharing****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

I thank you for this wonderful review and compliment kahpot.
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Note:
And yes, my writings will change one month of the year the month where my son's accident happened.
As soon as I get past April 1st the day we donated then I can write a little bit normal and not as deep.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When can look back at all the good things in our life and smile but when one event takes over our mind and haunts us, we will never shake off the grief Ricky, but live is for living and I wish you well, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

This April 1st will be 20 years that I've been living for my son. I promise I kept him so long ago.
I promise that nobody will ever forget what he has done and was about to do.
And that I would personally get to the very bottom of it which I have.
I tell everybody the same thing at 8:30 at night March 31st I died. The state of New Jersey recognizes Jason's death is that day, not me.
Maybe one day before I do die. I can again begin to live?
So for now I will live in all my writings and all my wonderful reviews and all the necessary things that I will do and continue to do for the gift of life people in Philadelphia.
You will notice a big difference in my writings for this month of March. It has been that way for quite a while.
April 2nd. I'll be able to think a little easier when it comes to normality in my poetry.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 13-Mar-2023

I feel for you Ricky, grief can be a hard journey x x x

Comment from JT traveller

Exceptional

A great story that takes the reader on a journey through decades of time.

Small typo, "At only Right years old."
Eight.

Oh to relive the savings interest rates of the eighties!

Another beautiful dedication to your son.

I thought the interluding Disney quotes were perfect. A great job.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023

I've always loved Walt Disney and his imagination is incredible.
Even his brother Frank said he would never do anything with the mouse thing!
Back in 1976.
I believe with my mother, myself, and one brother.
We would visit Disney World in Orlando, Florida by train.
The park had only been open 3 months!
This is where my three children were basically created.
3 weeks and three vacations visit many years later to my mom in Port Orange.
The rest is now enduring minus teo.
I sent Jason. Of course my wife Carolyn.
Thanks Jacqueline and those CDs!!!
Doctor Ricky
Doctor Ricky

reply by JT traveller on 12-Mar-2023

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